Snack
posted by jackie @ 11:58 AM
I think this was a very creative topic, even though simple. I feel that I might read the story better if you switch the first two photos though.
neat idea- im only suggestion would be to either have more on the search for the snack or more on the eating of the snack.
I think that the concept is really easy and simple to work. I like the various perspectives that you use in the shots. But if this is the topic that you decide to stick with then, having a before and after may help in making that story longer.
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I think this was a very creative topic, even though simple. I feel that I might read the story better if you switch the first two photos though.
neat idea- im only suggestion would be to either have more on the search for the snack or more on the eating of the snack.
I think that the concept is really easy and simple to work. I like the various perspectives that you use in the shots. But if this is the topic that you decide to stick with then, having a before and after may help in making that story longer.
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